写作规范练 ( 十七 )

Ⅰ . 应用文写作 ( 图表类写作 )

学校英文报正在开展以“ Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World ”为题的讨论。请使

用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1 ．学生近视率状况描述；

2 ．简单评论；

3 ．你的建议。

注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；

2 ．短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Protecting Our Eyes to Enjoy a Bright World

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参考范文

Protecting_Our_Eyes_to_Enjoy_a_Bright_World

The health of children ’ s vision is facing a growing threat.Data shows that 14.3 percent of

preschool kids are shortsighted.The rate is 35.6 percent for primary school pupils,71.1 percent for

junior high school students and 80.5 percent for senior high school students.

The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger.Meanwhile ， the

phenomenon of shortsightedness during the middle school is rapidly increasing.

To tackle the growing problem ， schools should reduce the academic burden of students and

increase the time of outdoor activities.What ’ s more ， we should attach importance to our visual

health and control the time spent on electronic devices.

Ⅱ . 读后续写 ( 动物救人 )

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was in about 40 feet of water all by myself.I knew I should not have gone alone ， but I was

rather competent and just took a chance.There was not much current ， and the water was so

warm ， clear and attractive.When I got a cramp( 抽筋 ) ， I realized at once how foolish I was.I was